Essay: "Weapons Training" by Bruce Dawe
The journey that is taken in Weapons
Training is the commander teaching the new recruits. At the beginning of the
poem, the first word that is used is “And”, which is a conjunctive word
suggesting that the journey that is being undertaken has already begun. Dawe uses spaces to fasten the pace in which
the poem is read, suggesting an idea of the urgency of this journey of training
that needs to be undertaken. The urgency is explored through the use of graphic
imagery such as “to hold off with a burst from your trusty weapon”. The use of
sexual imagery creates a sense of fear in the recruits, further suggesting the
notion of urgency and immediacy.
The journey can also be seen through the
reader as they gain an insight into military ways. The audience is presented
with a commander who belittles these new recruits “you at the back row with the
unsightly fat between your ears”. Dawe highlight to the audience that it is not
unusual in the military for demeaning language to be used. As the audience
progress on their journey, they are presented with several scenarios that are
both graphic and revealing “your tripes are round your neck”. The use of
graphical imagery confronts the audience that the journey the recruits will be
undertaking is one that is dangerous and life-threatening. The audience
realises the horrendous nature of journeys with Dawe creating insight into the
reader.
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